The Ferrywoman, Page 4

Mar 14, 2015, 4:26:31 PM


How It's Made: The Ferrywoman - 4

Happy Tuesday, let's break down the stuff for making page 4 of The Ferrywoman. Pencils below:

The Ferrywoman - 4 Pencils

The Ferrywoman - 4 Pencils

That's right, "use image from page 25." Here's the link to page 25. It's in the chapter "Kamiko and the Red Thread" where Kamiko finds Chang'e after she's been mauled by the wolf.

Storyboard

The Ferrywoman - 4 Storyboard

The Ferrywoman - 4 Storyboard

Script

JADE (upset, thumps the ground) For the mistress' sake, I'm against killing the demon!

TACHIBANA Jade, you forget, we killed his mortal body long ago.

JADE How?

TACHIBANA Your poison upon my arrow.

KAMIKO And he poisoned Chang'e with his bad blood.

JADE Then...then this is all my fault?

KAMIKO If we gave him the Elixir of Immortality, could that cure him? Frame. Close-up over-the-shoulder shot of Jade talking to Kamiko. Hana is visible next to her. [redacted]

JADE It's not a panacea! But yes, the monster will live on! But, I need the Elixir for the Mistress! You do too, so-called friend!

TACHIBANA (O.S.) There is another way.

Hey, if you have anything you want to know about how pages of This Mortal Coil are created feel free to leave a comment below and I will answer you, or I'll try my very best.

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